Hoagie Haiku

MediumGreek · Post by **MediumGreek** » Thu May 10, 2007 5:08 am

Split rolls, full of meat
Cheese, and onions peeled with love
Oh sacred hoagie!

Butterball · Post by **Butterball** » Thu May 10, 2007 10:55 am

Where to buy my hoagie today
Here or there
Lets stop here
Oh no there not there
I guess I can’t buy a hoagie here

Conan_the_Hoagarian · Post by **Conan_the_Hoagarian** » Fri May 11, 2007 5:34 pm

East End recipe
Onions, meat, et cetera
Hold the courtesy

1I'dhoagie · Post by **1I'dhoagie** » Sun May 13, 2007 10:40 pm

almost heaven, tyrone pa

gardners candie east end hoagie

1I'dhoagie · Post by **1I'dhoagie** » Sun May 13, 2007 10:42 pm

country road... take me home to the place

i belong tyrone pa east end hoagie

gardners candie oh take me home

Break_Like_The_Wind · Sun May 13, 2007 10:52 pm

Hey 1I'dhoagie
Learn how to write a haiku
Tyrone alumni?

MediumGreek · Post by **MediumGreek** » Mon May 14, 2007 8:47 am

A Tyrone High-ku
Dang it. What's a syllable?
Must I count to five?

Post by **Rick** » Mon May 14, 2007 11:01 am

At least you guys are being creative....

BTW, in case you need a refresher...

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku

MediumGreek · Post by **MediumGreek** » Mon May 14, 2007 3:35 pm

Administrator
Haiku third gone. So much for
minimalism

Post by **Rick** » Mon May 14, 2007 3:57 pm

one, two, THIRTY SIX!

so many new members now

must be here for food

:thumb:

DonkeyHoagie · Post by **DonkeyHoagie** » Wed May 16, 2007 4:42 pm

Oh Dulcinea
to be spurned by a sandwich
Twixt heart and Hoagie.

1I'dhoagie · Post by **1I'dhoagie** » Wed May 16, 2007 10:07 pm

my hoagie hiku...

east end hoagie you're the one
you make eating lots of fun
east end hoagie i'm awfully fond of you
yum...yum...yumyum...yummy..yum
east end hoagie joy of joys
when i eat you i make nosie
east end hoagie i'm awfully fond of you
oh, everyday when i make my way to the east end
i see a little fella whose peppers are sweet and yella and make me chubby ... chubby chub chubby
east end hoagie you're so fine and i'm lucky that your mine
east end hoagie i'm awfully fooooooooond of you

MediumGreek · Post by **MediumGreek** » Thu May 17, 2007 4:44 am

1I'dhoagie wrote:my hoagie hiku...

east end hoagie you're the one
you make eating lots of fun
east end hoagie i'm awfully fond of you
yum...yum...yumyum...yummy..yum
east end hoagie joy of joys
when i eat you i make nosie
east end hoagie i'm awfully fond of you
oh, everyday when i make my way to the east end
i see a little fella whose peppers are sweet and yella and make me chubby ... chubby chub chubby
east end hoagie you're so fine and i'm lucky that your mine
east end hoagie i'm awfully fooooooooond of you

Beautiful.
In Zen, once you attain emptiness, you shed all form. In this expansive approach to the haiku, you seem to have truly shed any adherence to form, leaving us empty.
You have shown us the face of your hoagie before it was made.

banksy · Post by **banksy** » Thu May 17, 2007 6:16 pm

Onions cut and sliced
Oil and Oregano topped
Last name come right now!

banksy · Post by **banksy** » Thu May 17, 2007 6:17 pm

Break_Like_The_Wind wrote:Hey 1I'dhoagie
Learn how to write a haiku
Tyrone alumni?

Well done!